The Eyes Of A Fetch (Excerpt 508) The End

Any doubts or reservations Lyla may have had are abandoned as she is held in the strength of Crispin’s arms. Both find themselves enveloped in more love and passion than either has ever known.

The warmth of Crispin’s lips near Lyla’s ear sends a fiery spark of energy through her body that he too feels in response. In a delicate loving manner, he softly speaks:

“May thou love me and as the sun follows its course, may thou follow me. As light to the eye, as bread to the hungry, as joy to the heart, may thy presence always be with me, oh one that I love.”

The End

Excerpt 508

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46 responses

  1. Beautiful ending…

    September 11, 2014 at 7:41 am

  2. A beuttiful ending to a wonderful story.
    Have you written another book, by any chance! _Resa 🙂

    September 16, 2014 at 5:21 pm

    • Hello Resa! I hope this note finds you well. Thank you for the lovely comment and to answer your question, yes I am currently editing my next book. However, this one introduces an entirely new storyline and set of unique individuals. Stay tuned! 🙂

      September 17, 2014 at 6:20 am

      • Oh. I will stay tuned!!!! 🙂

        September 17, 2014 at 4:21 pm

  3. What a great job you’ve done with this. Congratulations.

    September 18, 2014 at 9:46 am

  4. I’m a little sad this is over. However, I did come into things halfway through, so I’ll go back to the beginning and catch up. 🙂

    September 19, 2014 at 7:03 am

    • Thank you so much for your comment. 🙂 Currently, I am working on final edits for my next book which takes us to new places and introduces different faces. So please stay tuned.

      September 19, 2014 at 6:11 pm

  5. I like “sunny” endings.

    September 22, 2014 at 6:22 am

    • Thank you, Carl. Please stay tuned, I am currently in the middle of final edits for a new story with an interesting set of players, places, twists and turns. 🙂

      September 23, 2014 at 6:01 pm

  6. I’m tuned in – waiting … 🙂

    September 24, 2014 at 8:35 am

    • Thank you so much! I’m hoping to get the next story out soon. Have a great end of the week! 😀

      September 24, 2014 at 5:50 pm

      • Great to hear – cheers!

        September 25, 2014 at 3:26 am

  7. Beautiful!!! True Love !!! Thank you for liking my Painting!!! 🙂 *Cynthia

    September 24, 2014 at 6:03 pm

    • Hi Cynthia. Thank you for the kind words and I look forward to your next lovely creation. 😉

      September 24, 2014 at 8:15 pm

      • Thank You !!! 🙂

        September 24, 2014 at 9:12 pm

  8. Now this is the ending that I would like to have ” enveloped in more love and passion than either has ever known”

    I don’t know if it has ever been put more majestically & accurately. Beautiful.

    September 30, 2014 at 9:54 pm

  9. Cheri Vause, Author

    Hello and thank you for visiting my blog. looks like I’ll be visiting often to get caught up on your writing! Great idea. I think all your blog followers are ‘tuned in’ 🙂
    Nice to meet you …


    October 2, 2014 at 6:45 am

  10. Congratulations!!! Finishing a creative work is (almost) harder than starting one! Wishing you all the best on future work.

    October 6, 2014 at 5:50 am

    • Thank you for the kind words, Lori! I truly appreciate it! 😀

      October 6, 2014 at 6:27 pm

  11. may that little light
    always shine
    even from behind
    dark rain clouds 🙂

    October 18, 2014 at 10:36 am

  12. Stupendous thoughts.J.M

    December 2, 2014 at 7:33 pm

  13. Exquisite reflection ,specially the last thoughts in the conclusion.Regards.Jaalal

    December 5, 2014 at 7:34 pm

  14. josephbdoyledoyle

    Many many thanks for twitter love~ S.F.I. Ireland

    Your website is amazing~ You may consider a free w/site~ no charge~ to sell unwanted goods.

    Wishing you & yours a Happy healthy prosperous New 2015 Year
    Kind regards.

    January 1, 2015 at 8:58 am

    • Thank you, Joseph. I hope you and yours have a fantastic new year as well!

      January 1, 2015 at 6:21 pm

  15. Thanks for the like. I love Crispin’s touching words.

    January 31, 2015 at 12:04 pm

    • Thank you so much, Susan. I hope you are enjoying your weekend. 😉

      February 1, 2015 at 7:36 am

  16. Thank you for visiting my blog and for liking one of my posts. Blessings, Natalie 🙂

    May 24, 2015 at 9:55 pm

    • Thank you Natalie, have a fabulous week!

      May 25, 2015 at 6:30 am

  17. Oh, I do like sweet happy endings! I’m so glad you stopped by my blog and liked a post at @jeancogdell at Jean’s Writing

    May 25, 2015 at 11:14 am

  18. Very good.

    June 14, 2015 at 1:17 pm

    • Hey there, the mustang is looking AMAZING! You guys are doing such a fantastic job. Thanks for your kind words and have a wonderful week. 🙂

      June 14, 2015 at 5:07 pm

  19. You know how to keep your readers on the edge of their seats! This special love message makes the ending a sweet one. 🙂

    June 29, 2015 at 12:15 pm

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  21. Ooh, those Crispin wirds are delicious. You have such good writing skills!

    November 2, 2015 at 6:18 am

    • Ah yes, Crispin is a one of a kind, yes? 😉

      November 2, 2015 at 5:47 pm

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